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Scared

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Make it go away
You don't want to feel it anymore
Messed up on the inside
Lost on the outside

Make it stop
You don't want to feel that anymore
Confused all the time
Racing thoughts

Make it leave
You don't want to feel this anymore
The past hunts your mind
Pain felt once again

Make it disappear
You don't want to feel anything anymore
The future holds no hope
Hurting your soul

Make it die
You don't want to feel anymore
The present is gone
Just end this life
I hardly ever write poems behind the computer... But this one I did... I just started typing... What happened after I finished, was very weird though... I know that's vague... But it won't make sense anyway...
I like this poem... It's simple and clear.

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saro-n-mizary's avatar
Wow i like how this goes from an almost vague and broad "it", to a slightly more specific "that" to a "this" and slowly ends up at the very specific "anything"

very nice flow. your repitition of the form of the first two lines really worked well.